luckEfuck's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Let's Invent a holiday]

The animation was ok but nothing new. I didn't really care for the quality of humor, but hey, I'm also not a huge fan of puns. I think the text moves too fast on the screen even though I understand what a paradox is already. I think it would be nicer if I could actually read it though.

CyanSandwich responds:

Yeah I felt that the text was too fast. But I decided that lining it up with the music was more important because a lot of people probably wouldn't understand it anyway.

[Pardy Tiem]

Im judging this pretty much soley on the quality of the animation. Sooo...Good job?

Zachary responds:

Thanks!

[Quick Facial Animatioin]

It reads well, the only reason that I didn't 5 star it is because I want to see a more completed version of it! Love it so far can't wait to see what else you put out.

PeterNicholsonArt responds:

Thanks for the feedback :)

[GUIAN: The Joke]

The intro is nice. The humor was kind of meh though. If this is supposed to be your big debut back after three years, and you know this isn't the best video then post something better! Just a suggestion.

Also, there is a space in your youtube link between the 3 and 6 which brings users to a 404 error screen.

Akradon responds:

Thats strange with the link, when I go to edit it, there isn't a problem but when reading it the space is there :s strange one.

Thanks for the review. Glad you liked the intro :) But this isn't the big debut, this was just to see what hints and tips people could give me for animation really. Then hopefully I can improve from there.