luckEfuck's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Narutoe Shitpoodamn]

Holy shit, I shouldn't have laughed as hard as I did, but it is too late to take it back.

I have to admit, the animation was better then I expected it to be just based on the thumbnail. I am glad that I clicked on this submission.

DuDuL responds:

Ooh thanks

[Bouncing Bird Animation]

Nice, I'd like to see this taken to completion though. It looks like you have the bouncing ball principle down though! It was cute, I enjoyed it.

...so thanks!

[Binding of I(Ass)saac]

I got a chuckle out of this. I don't really know about the Isaac-ception thing or the end, but hey, what do I know??

Anyways, the animation wasn't bad, especially for a first time animation. I just think it could have been a bit cleaner. It felt a little jerky at times, like it could have used an extra in between frame to smooth it out. The lip sinking was a good start, that is always a pain in the ass to do!

Keep going! Get back to work! xD

[Downy 'n' Hat ep1]

The animation wasn't bad, but there just wasn't much of it. Also, it looks like you left onion skin on which gave the animation a weird slow-motion feel.

I don't really get the humor to be honest.

GillnKillshorts responds:

We try'd to make "downy's" hand appear to move supper fast as i asked Trevor to add a blur or an effect that would make it look so, he said the closest thing he could get to what we were looking for was using onion skin, do you by chance know how we could have done this with out onion skin? Also we are still working on what kind of animation "downy and hat" will become my dream is that they will become a mute duo that have strange adventures. Thank you LuckEfuck for the comment hope to see your reviews on future videos.

-Brandon

[petshop.]

I love that dumpy little walk the kid does after he enters the store. Ah seriously, I hated working retail because of stupid people/kids like that! So good job on making it relate-able!

I was pretty happy with it. The puma, cat...creature kinda lost me. I guess you were going for something completely unexpected. I almost would have rather seen the piranha jump out of the bowl and devour him completely. I feel the cat at the end was a little too random for me personally.

But awesome job!

TimeWasted responds:

Thanks! I actually had an alternate ending animated wherein the piranha bit off the kid's hand and slapped him with it, then used said hand to give the clerk a thumbs up. I wanted to go with something more unpredictable and non-sequitur, though.

[Tennis on Kepler 22b]

Not Bad.

The humor kind of reminds me of a throwback to older cartoons, especially since there is no dialogue. The animation is a little 'floaty' in places. Some of the holds felt like they were too static, maybe try to use a bit more of a moving hold instead? Other then that I liked it. Good job!

Joofville responds:

Thanks man. Yeah this is my first attempt and I hope to improve. Thanks for the advice will certainly use it in future projects.

[Game Grumps 3d #01]

Booom loved it!

It is actually really nice to see them in 3-D I think you translated it well from 2-D. The rendering was well done, nothing caught my eye or stood out as strange. I think the only thing I would suggest is a scrolling background when they are in the air. It feels just a little too static there. The animation quality is good and I hope to see more from you, especially if it is game grumps!

Esquirebob responds:

Definitely more coming, so GET EXCITEDDDDDDD :D

[Let's Invent a holiday]

The animation was ok but nothing new. I didn't really care for the quality of humor, but hey, I'm also not a huge fan of puns. I think the text moves too fast on the screen even though I understand what a paradox is already. I think it would be nicer if I could actually read it though.

CyanSandwich responds:

Yeah I felt that the text was too fast. But I decided that lining it up with the music was more important because a lot of people probably wouldn't understand it anyway.